Monochrome in the morning
On the water, sea through silhouetted pines
monochrome in the morning
the sun’s a pathway silvering, from shore to horizon
like flaming arrow’s flight, bright
Catalonia this morning
September’s softer sun
September 29th 2020, Tamariu
Perfect marrying of image to words, or words to image! 'Sea through silhouetted pines'. You do choose some lovely words!!
ReplyDeleteThis was the view from our hotel Clare and I was surprised how monochrome it was when captured in a photo. I think a lot about the words - as you can imagine! Sometimes I have to cut a word/ phrase that I love because it's wrong in the poem. Silhouetted came late in the writing, as an adjective.
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