Unremarkable today
Dawn at seven, pink
eastern watercolour sky
mist on cloudy fields
Sun in upward arc
stark skeletons of trees
dew pond's beacon beam
Pale track falters
hibernating vines in lines
unremarkable today
February 8th 2020 Hounoux
Dawn at seven, pink
eastern watercolour sky
mist on cloudy fields
Sun in upward arc
stark skeletons of trees
dew pond's beacon beam
Pale track falters
hibernating vines in lines
unremarkable today
February 8th 2020 Hounoux
Exploring Haiku? I enjoy reading this style and this is very visual for me knowlimg your view. I have two completely unconnected friends who have recently said they enjoy writing Haiku.
ReplyDeleteI am enjoying haiku for sure Jude, thanks to the book you gave me. It's good to be restricted to the bare bones, it makes each word more important I think. Interesting coincidence amongst your friends. Xx
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